Everybody raved about the new iPhone.
Since I was due for a new one I decided to get one.
My dad said, "wait two months after the release of the 5,"
So I obeyed, and now i ahve the phone and all its "fun."
However, that "fun" turned into pain!
And that pain turned into a huge headache!
The phone doesn't work; I get no calls or texts.
Maybe it would work better with a good shake.
"This is such a pain, why can't my phone just work?"
I said to my dad while I sit and pout.
AT&T doesn't know what to do except change the SIM.
Apple said they could switch the phone out!
Now with another new phone things started to work.
First day so far so good,
Second day same as the first!
And the third of course it doesn't work like it should!
I can't believe that happened! Hopefully you'll have better luck in the future with your phone. I'm sorry that happened! Great poem though.
ReplyDeleteThis was a very cute poem I like the dialogue you incorporated in it. I hear a lot of people complaining about their iphones so you at least you aren't the only one. Hopefully it doesn't act up again and you can enjoy all the "fun" of our complicated technology.
ReplyDeleteI agree with both Kaysee and Ashley! I really liked the way you wrote the poem and how you incorporated dialogue into it. Well done! I hope your luck with cell phones gets better for the future. Lol.
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